Mustang Ad is still a bit wordy...It comes across as just a gigantic block of text to me.

IMHO, you need to Photoshop a guy in the car with a gigantic bag of groceries in the back...but thats just my humorous side coming out.

Also, needs more cowbell.

 

but you ain't that much older than me. Of course I know the ballistics for most any production cartridge created before 1999 off the top of my head so I guess I just paid attention to different things.

 

Gotta have more cowbell!