Wrote a poem to my fiance who her and I are "seperating" for a while.

"In my previous life time i know we once shared a last kiss, At night when we sleep I always put you in my dreams, hoping that at the same time your sending me a message, that you taste me on your lips and your feeling just as desperate cause were separate, tell me were together even if its our spirits. this romance cant die, it stays alive in my lyrics. You hold a place in my heart like a queen that has rights on her throne, Until then I'll just live my life feeling incomplete following shooting starts to find you, Looking for that one wish where together we touch lips, again, now and forever like we once did. Tears fell simply to reflect my expression, cause your beauty was truly shining next to perfection. But its ended, unable to accept the situation how we shifted our relationship from lovers to acquaintances. Obviously, your satisfied by how you get by and I hide behind my smile because that's just how I have to die, Realizing that you forgot we were once together, and never would of I thought that once you would surrender, And now i have ended dark days of sorrow and found that without you I will always hate tomorrow."

Just want to know what you think of the poem, if you have advice about the relationship just keep it to yourself, I stopped listening to other peoples advice and what other people think. And just going to let time answer all my questions.

 

 

O'rlly?

 

So... spin.... did you cry when you wrote that?


all wuvvy dovy wuv sick?



Lol.... yer totally gay.

seriously... you put up a love poem to yer girl for a bunch of CAR GUYS to read?

gay gay gay

 

well, if she doesnt take you back after that...well, she doesnt want to be with you. Great poem...it is revealing of how you feel about her. I had my girlfriend read it and she almost shed a tear. Good Luck man.

 

OH... MY... GOD!!!! Why dont you and Spin go to www.EMOforums.com where the two of you sappy assed bitches belongs?

 

LOL... na, im not even that good. i was lazy and just goggle-image'd "emo kid"

 

Hey jack, Its ok it.

I understand it has to be dissapointing that the poem's that you write to your "girl" a.k.a your hand never understands them.

 

That comeback was weaker than your wrist.

lol.....

 

lol why are you such a hater.

 

And then you say im gay...

 

LOL.... sorry man, but i see a love poem on here i gotta give some crap about it.

 

Lol... uhm, nope.

 

Takes a lot of ***** to post one, and i was suprised just how creative i got with it. And personally i dont care what all you shlong loving guys think.

But thanks slick!